HEY THERE INDIE AUTHOR!

Is Your BOOK ready for it's BIG Debut?

Before releasing your book to the world, getting an objective perspective is essential. As a professional beta reader, I provide valuable feedback to help you refine your manuscript, ensuring it captivates your readers and achieves your goals.

Now you can get your book professionally evaluated by a Whale Reader! 🐳

I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL

What if i told you it doesn't have to be difficult?

I'm Dana, Your Ideal Beta Reader

Picture this: A marketing expert with 30 years of experience who’s also a certified bookworm—that’s me! I devour over 300 books a year, spanning all fiction genres, and many of them I discover by clicking on ads. So, when I say I know what makes a reader click, I mean it!

When I’m not buried in a great story, I’m busy helping authors perfect their manuscripts with expert beta reading. I’ve merged my marketing expertise and love for reading to offer comprehensive feedback on your manuscript, so it’s not just good—it’s irresistible.

With my unique blend of insight, I’m here to help you take your manuscript to the next level, ensuring it captivates readers and meets your goals.

So What I Offer

  • Comprehensive Feedback: Detailed insights on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, world-building, and more.
  • Reader’s Perspective: Honest, constructive feedback from a reader's point of view, helping you identify strengths and areas for improvement.
  • Preparedness: A clear outline of the questions I'll be addressing, so you know exactly what to expect and can focus on the areas that matter most.


Here's a glimpse of the key questions I'll cover in my feedback:

  • Plot Development: Is the story engaging? Are there any plot holes or areas that need clarification?
  • Pacing: Does the story flow smoothly, or are there sections that feel too slow or rushed?
  • Character Development: Are the characters well-developed and believable? Do their actions make sense within the story?
  • Dialogue: Is the dialogue natural and fitting for the characters? Does it contribute to the plot and character development?
  • World-Building: Is the setting vivid and well-described? Does the world feel immersive and consistent?
  • Theme and Message: Is the theme clear and well-integrated into the story? Does the book convey its intended message effectively?
  • Emotional Impact: Does the story evoke the intended emotions? Are there memorable moments that stand out?
  • Market Appeal: Does the book appeal to its intended audience? How marketable is it?

Being prepared for these questions will help you focus on the aspects of your manuscript that are most important to you.

Ready to Get Started?

$49

Why Choose My Beta Reading Service?

  • Professional Experience: With years of experience in beta reading across various genres, I understand what makes a story resonate with readers.
  • Personalized Feedback: Each manuscript is unique. I tailor my feedback to suit your specific needs and goals.
  • Confidentiality Guaranteed: Your work is safe with me. I respect your intellectual property and maintain strict confidentiality.

Don't leave your book's success to chance!

Transform your book and captivate your readers—let's make your story shine!

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